Thursday 3 May 2018

Water for wildlife


WALT:   Make meaning from text, synthesize information from different texts, make connections between texts, construct a text using careful choice of content, organise and sequence ideas.

7 comments:

  1. Hi Noah May name is Payton from kawakawa primary, I really liked your blog post about eagles it has lots of great information and facts. Maybe next time you could tell us why you actually wrote about this topic was it because you had a set task. Anyway other than that your blog post was really cool and if you would like to see my blog
    check it out here
    http://kpspaytonm.blogspot.co.nz/

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  2. Hi Noah my name is Miria from Kawakawa primary I like your Eagle presentation it is very unique, interesting and cool but maybe next time you can tell us why you like this topic and why you chose it.here is my blog if you want to check it out. http://kpsmiriaf.blogspot.co.nz bye nice talking to yah!!

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  3. Hi Noah this is Trinity and this is amzing work. I thin you have worked hard on this. But I like how you were whriteing about the egale.Then you aded water that is amazing from Trinity this was amazing

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  4. Hi Noah it's Dakota from Kawakawa Primary School and I am your blog buddy for the week. I really like your eagle presentation it is really factual and and the facts are really cool and not just normal ones. I also really like how you added a GIF of an eagle at the end. But you could've added a better font than the one you used, but overall well done and I cant wait to see more posts from you bye!!

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    1. Hi Dakota thanks for the comment and I'm just about to do some more publishing. After that I will look at your blog and comment.

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  5. Hi Noah it's Nadia from Saint Patrick's school in Greymouth.
    I really like the amount of detail that you put into your work.
    I just have one question for you, what is your favourite eagle? I also did this task for the theme last term 1. Maybe next time you could check your punctuation.

    Blog ya latter!!!
    -Nadia

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  6. Kia Ora Noah,

    My name is Leilani and I am a year eight student from Kawakawa Primary School.
    I really enjoyed this presentation of eagles, it is very interesting and I these facts are very informative. nice work and I am really looking forward to your next blog post. If you want to look at my blog then go to kpsleilanid.blogspot.co.nz cya.

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Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments.